Ambush of Hohsalle and Makokan
The Deer KingThe Ambush of Hohsalle and Makokan turns an uneasy encounter on a mountain path into a sudden capture, leaving the two travelers separated and Makokan bound in a woodshed. Its decisive reversal comes not from the dogs he sees surrounding them, but from the hidden attackers who strike while he is trying to respond—and from the final revelation that the woman who appears after his awakening is his sister Ilia.
The Encirclement
Makokan first notices the danger as a prickling at the back of his scalp. Eyes shine beneath the trees on both sides of the path, where a whole pack crouches in the underbrush. He freezes; when Hohsalle asks what is wrong, Makokan answers in a low, urgent warning that they are surrounded.
The dogs emerge as if his words were a signal. They bare their fangs and snarl, but do not attack. Makokan moves cautiously, trying not to alarm them, and reaches for his sword hilt. The apparent threat holds his attention at the very moment the actual attack begins: Hohsalle suddenly jerks and falls from his horse, and Makokan calls out to him.
The Blow-Dart Attack
A sharp pain blossoms in Makokan’s neck. He puts a hand to it and feels a small needle; recognizing the weapon as a blow dart, he loses control of his head and falls into oblivion. The capture is swift and deliberately disabling. The dogs’ threatening presence masks the weapon that incapacitates him, while Hohsalle is brought down at the same moment. The account does not establish who fired the darts or what happens to Hohsalle after he falls.
Captive in the Woodshed
Makokan wakes to sunset light falling through bars and a severe pounding in his head. He spits out the saliva pooled in his mouth and tries to wipe his face, only to discover that his hands are tied behind him. The room smells of wood; firewood stacked against the wall leads him to identify it as a woodshed.
His wrists are bound together and tied to a post, and he is alone in the small hut. He cannot tell where Hohsalle is or what has happened to him. In pain, Makokan considers whether the Kinma Handlers drugged and imprisoned them, but even this explanation leaves him baffled: if they wanted to prevent an investigation, he cannot see why they would not simply have killed the two of them.
Ilia’s Entrance
A dog barks outside as if fawning upon its master. The door opens, letting in the setting sun, and a figure appears in silhouette. Once the middle-aged woman closes the door and the glare recedes, Makokan can make out her face. His pulse quickens; he recognizes her eyes and pursed lips before he can fully accept what he is seeing.
The recognition comes out as a croak: he says his sister’s name, Ilia. The story ends this part on that identification, without explaining why she is there, what role she had in the capture, or where Hohsalle has been taken. The ambush therefore closes not with an answer but with a personal revelation that sharply changes the meaning of Makokan’s captivity: the person who enters his prison is family, though her connection to the attack remains unresolved.


